User:Fishmansf4/Freshwater ecosystem/User000017 Peer Review

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Yes, fresh water is an important resource. It looks like the section Human will be going under the Threats category on the original Wiki page. Although it could go under it's own category like Conservation Efforts, something this page is lacking. Another interesting way this article could go is talking about how policies have helped freshwater systems. For example, Lake Superior has had a history of conservation efforts over the iron ore deposits going into Lake Superior. Located in Silver Bay, Black Beach is the results of iron mining where the taconite was washing up on shore and turned the beach black. The taconite tailings ended up hurting the fish populations and for a time they were worried about the beach being one big carcinogenic. Although now thousands of people flock to the North Shore and Black Beach is a destination location where people spend the afternoon on the Black Beach shoreline.