User:Fitzinator2/Media activism/Narmstrong1010 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fitznator2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Fitzinator2/sandbox&oldid=1048001178
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Media activism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Concise focus on Hong Kong and China. I enjoyed learning about the special treaty, which is supposed to help Hong Kong maintain autonomy from China.

I think if you can find an example of what facets of the internet helped spread the word about discord in Hong Kong (for example, was it a social media app or an online news article?), it may help put context on the internet's power and limitations in the late 1990s/early 2000s.

First paragraph: there's one instance where the "C" in China is not capitalized. Second paragraph, change "where" to were.

Maybe find a source that goes a little more into detail about what the special agreement was called? Who agreed or signed the special agreement before Great Britain handed off Hong Kong to China?

I really liked this area of focus. There's a lot of history and politics at play. Your article was neutral. There were citations to back up your statements.