User:Flannel Tea Girl/Mighty girl effect/Mackenziegan Peer Review


 * 1) I think this article does a very good job of laying down what the Might Girl Effect is for someone who has never heard of the term before. I was impressed with the amount of data that is used in backing up the existence of said effect. I especially liked how the norms section laid out what the Mighty Girl Effect looks like in adolescence, but also through adulthood.
 * 2) (This is more of a housekeeping issue but your norm paragraph is in two places in your article). Personally, the use of the words “secondary-school age” is a little ambiguous and confusing. I think it would be easier for your audience to have actual age numbers or specific grades rather than leaving the interpretation of “secondary-school age” up to the reader. Updating that language could also make the transition easier for non-American readers also.

I think the best thing that you guys could add to this article would be to add examples of what the mighty girl effect looks like in practice. I know that you have included a politics segment of your article and I think including examples of legislation or supporting laws/acts from male representatives or congress members who have first born daughters could be interesting to see. (the Obamas could also be a good example to look to for a political family with first born daughters, also modern and relevant) I think adding the term "girl dad" could also be an interesting addition to support the idea of the Mighty Girl Effect (I think of Kobe Bryant when I think of what it means to be a "girl dad")

General info
(provide username)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)