User:Florakerner/Nototodarus sloanii/Florakerner Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adenosinedp


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Nototodarus sloanii
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nototodarus sloanii

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

LEAD

I think the lead may need a little more about the general characteristics of the species itself, you could maybe add a few sentences from the description section to the lead.

The part in the lead talking about the species' predators may relate more to the habitat section of the article.

CONTENT

The content is all relevant to the topic and up-to-date.

All of the content seems accurate, there might just need to be some rearranging of a few sentences here and there based on the different sections of the article.

TONE AND BALANCE

The content is not persuasive and is from a neutral standpoint.

The information seems to come from reliable sources.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES

All the information seems to be properly cited.

The sources used are all relatively recent and the links work as they should.

The content accurately aligns with the information provided by the sources.

ORGANIZATION

The content is clear and I did not see any grammatical errors or misspellings.

You might want to add a little more to the habitat section, maybe the part from the lead section about the species' predators.

The sections are all relevant and well organized.

IMAGES AND MEDIA

The image is placed in a good spot and is related to the article topic.

The image is well-captioned and seems to adhere to Wikipedia regulations.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS

The article is very well written and comprehensive.

I think adding a little more about the basic characteristics of the species to the lead section and adding a little more to the habitat section would enhance the article.

Good job, this looks great!!