User:Florakerner/Schayer's Brittle Star/Adenosinedp Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Florakerner


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Florakerner/Schayer's_Brittle_Star?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Florakerner/Schayer's_Brittle_Star?action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD

The lead introduces the species in a concise manner; however, I feel that adding some more information to introduce the species, such as taxonomic information, would be useful.

It also contains useful and straight forward information on some of the features of the species before getting into the details about these things.

I feel that you could remove some of the information such as the way they feed and discuss that later as it is not an introductory feature like anatomy or distribution.

CONTENT

The content is very relevant and well cited.

It is relatively up to date and well detailed.

Some more detail regarding the diet and food chain of the species would be useful in this, as well as discussing more on its behavior as a species and how it interacts with other creatures.

TONE AND BALANCE

The content seems to be unbiased and from a good number of reputable sources.

All topics you have spoken about are equally discussed.

The information does not sway the reader to a specific side but rather delivers the information in a neutral manner.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES

The content is backed up with sources.

I feel that you should add more citations in what you have written.

The sources are a good mix of current and relatively current, giving a good spectrum of sources.

These are quality sources for discussing this species, and considering how finding information on the species for this assignment is pretty difficult, this is a great job.

The links work fine and sources are accounted for.

ORGANIZATION

This is well written and easy to understand and read.

Consider organizing the information in categories that will allow the reader to distinguish different subtopics.

No grammar or spelling errors as far as I can see.

IMAGES AND MEDIA

Still need to include some images and captions.

Remember to cite the images.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS

This is a strong introductory article on this species and it is well organized and cited.

Just remember to change the organization of information as mentioned above and to add some images.