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Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

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Option 1

 * Article title-High-yielding variety
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article could use some more relevant information to boost its content. It is written neutrally, but there is very little information listed other than having a good foundation to expand on. There are a few claims made in the article and only one has a citation, therefore this is a perfect article to contribute to because there are lots of fresh material to add to the topic of high-yielding varieties. The only source that is referenced in the article is on high-yielding varieties of wheat and rice in less-developed countries.
 * The talk page has no current discussion, and in hopes of adding more relevant content this will promote more involvement in high-yielding varieties.
 * Sources
 * Rahman, M.M., Connor, J.D. The effect of high-yielding variety on rice yield, farm income and household nutrition: evidence from rural Bangladesh. Agric & Food Secur 11, 35 (2022). https://doi.org/10.1186/s40066-022-00365-6
 * Ficiciyan, A. M., Loos, J., & Tscharntke, T. (2021). Similar Yield Benefits of Hybrid, Conventional, and Organic Tomato and Sweet Pepper Varieties Under Well-Watered and Drought-Stressed Conditions. Frontiers in Sustainable Food Systems, 5. https://doi.org/10.3389/fsufs.2021.628537
 * Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations. (2016). Fact sheet 11 rice/maize high yielding hybrids help. Save and Grow Farming Systems. Retrieved March 12, 2023, from https://www.fao.org/3/i5314e/i5314e.pdf
 * Tinashe-Mashizha. (2022, August 31). Plant breeding for high-yielding staple crops has multiple benefits. Tinashe Mashizha. Retrieved March 11, 2023, from https://www.plantagbiosciences.org/people/tinashe-mashizha/2022/08/31/plant-breeding-for-high-yielding-staple-crops-has-multiple-benefits/
 * Ficiciyan, A. M., Loos, J., & Tscharntke, T. (2021). Similar Yield Benefits of Hybrid, Conventional, and Organic Tomato and Sweet Pepper Varieties Under Well-Watered and Drought-Stressed Conditions. Frontiers in Sustainable Food Systems, 5. https://doi.org/10.3389/fsufs.2021.628537
 * Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations. (2016). Fact sheet 11 rice/maize high yielding hybrids help. Save and Grow Farming Systems. Retrieved March 12, 2023, from https://www.fao.org/3/i5314e/i5314e.pdf
 * Tinashe-Mashizha. (2022, August 31). Plant breeding for high-yielding staple crops has multiple benefits. Tinashe Mashizha. Retrieved March 11, 2023, from https://www.plantagbiosciences.org/people/tinashe-mashizha/2022/08/31/plant-breeding-for-high-yielding-staple-crops-has-multiple-benefits/

Option 2

 * Article title-Aeromonadales
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has 4 sentences describing Aeromondales along with its bacterial domain and characteristics. It is written neutrally, however it is a stub that could use some work such as describing its pathogenicity or even possible diseases. There are two sources cited in the article which describe characteristics of this bacteria. When checking the talk page it is to be noted that it has not been edited since its original contribution. The sources are relevant and reliable. This is a good article to contribute to because there is much detail to be added.
 * The article has 4 sentences describing Aeromondales along with its bacterial domain and characteristics. It is written neutrally, however it is a stub that could use some work such as describing its pathogenicity or even possible diseases. There are two sources cited in the article which describe characteristics of this bacteria. When checking the talk page it is to be noted that it has not been edited since its original contribution. The sources are relevant and reliable. This is a good article to contribute to because there is much detail to be added.


 * Sources
 * O'Beirne, D., & Francis, G. A. (2003). Reducing Pathogen Risks in MAP-Prepared Produce. Novel Food Packaging Techniques. Woodhead Publishing Series in Food Science, Technology and Nutrition 2003, Pages 231-275
 * Canada Public Health Agency. (2012, April 30). Government of Canada. Pathogen Safety Data Sheets: Infectious Substances – Aeromonas hydrophila - Canada.ca. Retrieved March 11, 2023, from https://www.canada.ca/en/public-health/services/laboratory-biosafety-biosecurity/pathogen-safety-data-sheets-risk-assessment/aeromonas-hydrophila.html
 * Ugarte-Torres, A., Perry, S., Franko, A. et al. Multidrug-resistant Aeromonas hydrophila causing fatal bilateral necrotizing fasciitis in an immunocompromised patient: a case report. J Med Case Reports 12, 326 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s13256-018-1854-1

Option 3

 * Article title-Cordana musae
 * Article Evaluation
 * There are two sentences in this article that describe how Cordana musae is an ascomycete plant pathogen attacking bananas. The article's content is a relevant topic, but it is very focused to where it may not be of high importance. There is one citation that is reputable which is from the University of Hawaii and its college of tropical agriculture expertise. The article is in fact written neutrally where it is informative and not bias. When looking at the talk page for this article, it has not been touched since its original posting. Therefore, touching more on this article to present where it is most common and present would be ideal. More detail on combating this pathogen and to relating pathogens could be conducted.
 * There are two sentences in this article that describe how Cordana musae is an ascomycete plant pathogen attacking bananas. The article's content is a relevant topic, but it is very focused to where it may not be of high importance. There is one citation that is reputable which is from the University of Hawaii and its college of tropical agriculture expertise. The article is in fact written neutrally where it is informative and not bias. When looking at the talk page for this article, it has not been touched since its original posting. Therefore, touching more on this article to present where it is most common and present would be ideal. More detail on combating this pathogen and to relating pathogens could be conducted.


 * Sources
 * Bayer Crop Science. (2023). Cordana leaf spot: Diseases: Bayer crop science. Cordana leaf spot. Retrieved March 11, 2023, from https://www.crop.bayer.com.au/pests/diseases/cordana-leaf-spot
 * Vezina, A., & Dreyer, B. S. (2020, July 16). Cordana Leaf Spot. Improving the understanding of banana. Retrieved March 11, 2023, from https://www.promusa.org/Cordana+leaf+spot