User:FlowerandFeast/Palghar district/Mango37836 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(FlowerandFeast)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FlowerandFeast/Palghar_district?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Palghar district

Evaluate the drafted changes
I can see the basic Idea of what you want to add to this article and its definitely relevant to the topic. You dont have sources and the writing is limited on the subject but thats understandable because its a first draft. You could definitely expand more on the debate around sending water to Mumbai with data. Its really important to see exactly how this practice is effecting the inhabitants of Palghar. Another topic you could include is the quality of the water infrastructure, and perhaps the impact it has on the environment (positive or negative). Your tone is completely neutral too. Good Job.