User:FlowerandFeast/Rainwater harvesting/Mango37836 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(FlowerandFeast)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FlowerandFeast/Rainwater_harvesting?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rainwater harvesting

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a strong foundation for the final draft of your changes to the article. I think you are covering the subject to the scale of the entire country in a very clear way. Each point just needs some more elaboration to full flesh out how it is significant to the article. For example "Increase in rainwater harvesting efforts across the nation have led ancient water harvesting systems in Rajasthan have to revive, such as the the chauka system from Jaipur district", what are the implications of these ancient systems being revived? Are they capable of harvesting rainwater to the same quality as modern systems? Are there any criticisms or controversies surrounding these systems? The last three sentences focusing on rainwater harvesting today are setting up very important information, they just need more elaboration as well. This line: "leaving few to take it seriously" may be interpreted as a non neutral tone. The two sources you have are very informative and they seem to have given you a lot of very helpful facts for this draft. More sources are going to be needed to expand on the points you want to make but these two are a good starting point. I think you've represented their information very well.