User:Fluffpups/Social intelligence/Autumn1297 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fluffpups


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fluffpups/Social_intelligence?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social intelligence

Evaluate the drafted changes
The second addition you made to the article is appreciated, but I would use a more neutral tone/rephrase. Instead of saying "It would make sense...", I would say, "Social intelligence and interpersonal intelligence were thought to coexist, but the two subjects diverge into two unique fields of study" or something along those lines. Other than that, I think the other additions look great thus far.

I don't have much to say about the new edits. I believe Fluffpups is ready to start moving their edits to the main article. Each edit is well stated, and a great addition to the article.