User:FlyingSpacePenguin/Alkylidene Ketenes/Spqr mc Peer Review

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FlyingSpacePenguin
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FlyingSpacePenguin/Alkylidene_Ketenes?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
In the introduction section, I think that the last sentence mentioning carbon suboxide is not necessary, as there is no follow up in your body paragraphs.

The first sentence of the paragraph "Thermolysis of carboxylic acids and Meldrum's acid species" is a run-on sentence.

Run-on sentence again at the second sentence of the paragraph "photochemical cleavage".

Last paragraph run-on sentence again; you cannot use "however" in the middle of a sentence.

For your "Reaction with Nucleophiles", please include more diagrams to illustrate the reactions.