User:Foggypinaster/OLES2129

Tutorial 2 - Activity 2

I have looked at the article 'Animal Rights' and the first revision only contains very simple description of the term 'animal rights' with only one sentence. If i were the first editor, would have provided a more official and specific explanation of the term "animal rights". And i would have explained that what kind of behavior is against animal rights and would have given several real life examples. Besides, i would have mentioned the activities and campaigns held by people to safeguard and publicize animal rights. Informations like who was the first one to come up with the concept 'animal rights', from when did people start to pay attention to 'animal rights', and in which part of the world ‘animal rights' are badly deprived would also have been included if i first edited this article. Also, relevant photographs should have been attached, like photos showing the scene of human abusing animals and animal lovers' parade.

Topic 6
Demon Hunter

the reason: the article lacks late information in the 'Later releases' section.

I added the information about their latest release, including the topic and the release date, with citation.