User:Folkloree/16th Street Baptist Church bombing/Terrapin2022 Peer Review

General info
Folkloree
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Folkloree/16th Street Baptist Church bombing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):16th Street Baptist Church bombing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Most of the information above is not applicable to the drafted article contributions that are in the Sandbox draft of the article, 16th Street Baptist Church Bombing.

With the information provided, I would say that the proposed contributions are not applicable to the final article. Johnny Robinson and Virgil Ware are talked about in the reactions section of the church bombing article, but they should not be the highlight of the article. The primary articles title is 16th Street Baptist Church Bombing, which in theory doesn't involve Robinson or Ware. Although it is a great addition to include in the unrest that was relevant after the bombing, there doesn't need to actually be much detail into the injustice of those two murders in this article. Try contributing to another article about those deaths or start a new one.