User:Fomanka/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Medical device hijack:
 * Article Evaluation
 * - The lead section of the article doesn't adequately describe the theme of the article. Several statements in the lead section can not be easily verified.
 * -The article's content is relevant to the topic. However, the content of the article is not up to date.
 * - There are not sufficient reference to back up information about impacted medical devices as captured in the article
 * - The reader found instances of grammatical errors.
 * - The sectioning of the article did not present coherence or flow throughout the article.
 * - In the Talk Page, a Wikipedian commented that the word "MEDJACK" that was used in the article is made up word which is not popular in the technology environment:
 * Sources:Majority of the sources listed are not from peered reviewed sources

Option 2

 * Article title:Deception Technology
 * Article Evaluation:- The lead section of the article is clearly and concisely defines the topic. It was easy for the reader to identify the topic from the first sentence.:- The article's content is relevant to the topic. :- The article contains some promotional content which violate Wikipedia's policy of neutrality when it comes to presenting points of view.:- There are conversations in the talk page. The reader added a comment regarding the traceability of some references in the article. For example the first reference in the article. :- Some sections of the article did not have a single reference even though information that is original was mention
 * Sources:- The references in this article are very few and some of the reference links are not verifiable.:

Option 3

 * Article title:Cyber-kinetic attack
 * Article Evaluation
 * - The Lead Section of the article provides a concise overview of cyber-kinetic attacks. The reader could quickly understand what the topic was all about. Also, the Lead Section of the article succinctly and concisely captured the some vital categories of cyber-kinetic attacks, giving the reader excitement to learn more about the topic.::- The reader found the content of the article to be relevant to the topic.:- The reader recommends that the article could be improved by having more literature with verifiable sources.:- The "Crossing the cyber-physical divide" section has a mixture of several types and examples of cyber-kinetic attacks. The paper could be improved by creating different a distinct category of each of type of attack and expatiating more.:- The flow of the article needs to be improved. The last paragraph of the article starts with "These types of attacks........". The idea being introduced in this paragraph is not clear enough.:-Only on Wikipedian contributed in this article per the conversations on the Talk Page. This contributor updated the article by capturing the scope of systems commonly affected by cyber-kinetic attacks such as PLCs, SCADA systems, and IoT.:::Sources:- The article had just one reference from a peer-reviewed article.:- The article could be improved by citing more reliable sources other that news media sources:

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