User:Football1144/Netflix/Cooki3monster676 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

maloqueiro99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Football1144/Netflix?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Netflix

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to reflect the information added. The content added is relevant to the topic and is up to date. The content added is neutral and does not attempt to persuade the audience. However, the sources are not suitable for a Wikipedia article. They all come from Netflix's own website, which is not reliable. Netflix's website is a good starting point to gather information, but it is important to verify the information by finding, for example, a peer-reviewed source. Also, the wording seems to be very similar to the sources' wording, therefore it would be beneficial to reword so as not to plagiarize. With the amount of information included, there should be a few more sources to ensure the information in reliable and accurate. There should be more citations within the contribution so readers know exactly where the information came from. Also, the last paragraph does not have a citation at all. Overall, the article is easy to read, however much of the information is straight from the sources. There are only a few grammatical errors. The content is also well-organized, there are many sections separating the important information which makes it easy to read and comprehend.

The content added has improved the article because this information is very relevant and important. Some strengths are it is very detailed and a lot of information is included, leaving readers with a solid understanding. However, the article could be improved by using more reliable sources, using more sources overall, and rewording the information so as not copy directly from the source.