User:Football is cool/Allstate/OliveHyperion61 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Football is cool


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Football%20is%20cool/Allstate?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft on Allstate is written with a very neutral tone, as it provides a brief summary on Allstate's response to climate change and how it has affected the business, with a focus on its goal of reaching net-zero emissions by 2030 and the rise in insurance claims brought on by climate-related natural disasters. The references come from three reputable sources that support the draft. Overall, it is written very well, but it could benefit from more specific examples from the investments that Allstate has made in climate improvement and adaptation to the effects of climate change.