User:Football is cool/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Allstate Article

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I think it is interesting to see how to climate interacts with the insurance industry.

Evaluate the article
The article is lacking overall information on climate change or the effects of Allstate on the climate. It is the perfect article to edit for a climate class because of this missing information. The sources and links all seem to be working, and all of the sources seem to meet the guidelines set by Wikipedia. Some of the sources are a little dated so I need to ensure I use up-to-date sources to help balance that. The article is written in a neutral tone and that is something I need to ensure continues. There are a few instances where the article does have some bias viewpoints but nothing that is incorrect information. All of the content in the article is relevant and direct. Nothing seems to be just a filler paragraph and every piece of information has a purpose. The only thing that could be an issue is the lack of information online about Allstate. The strength of the article is the organization of the article. The article is easy to follow. The article could be improved with the inclusion of more up-to-date information. There were not pictures and media included in the article other than the Allstate logo. The talk page is quite active and it looks as if some images were removed that were previously on the article due to a violation of fair use. The talk page also shows that a lot of previous correct information that changed was removed. This also shows that the article has been updated over the years. A lot of the information that was removed was from 2007.