User:Footballer 28/Meno (general)/Serina Jack Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Footballer 28


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Footballer%2028/Meno_(general)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Meno (general)

Evaluate the drafted changes
1.The Lead Section

-You do good job at showing the importance of the subject, Meno. You might consider adding in some names of major victories or defeats, or wars Meno fought into the lead section, so as to give a greater understanding of why he is important. As it stands though, there is a lot of information in the lead, but more could be useful.

2. Clarity of Article Structure

-You consider clarifying, "Meno while still young was given command". How young? is it known?

-the Meno's Demise article could be clarified a bit, by starting it saying, "there are two main versions about Meno's fate..." Or something similar, as it is, its a bit confusing at first reading.

3. Coverage Balance

-Overall good coverage what is actually known of Meno's life

4. Content Neutrality

-Pretty good neutrality, however there is the claim that, "Ctesias is generally an unreliable historian," which is not neutral, and could use clarification or evidence.

5. Sources

-Excellent division of sources into ancient and modern, several recent sources.

-As far as images, if there are non of Meno available, you could provide an image of a map of the location his place of origin or an image of hoplite warfare, or a military map of the battle of Cunaxa, showing the locations of two sides in battle, I don't if one exists or not. Or even images of other major people mentioned in the article perhaps?