User:Footpathandstile/Farangi-Sazi/Saifnasr25 Peer Review

General info
Footpathandstile
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Footpathandstile/Farangi-Sazi
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Farangi-Sazi:

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a really good outline on what they want to accomplish. Farangi-Sazi is a perfect subject as the wiki page has not been built out. I really like the parallels outside Iran section and excited to see that develop. I wonder how this painting relates to the rest of the Islamic world. I am also very interested in the precedents section which will talked about influences on the painting. One thing that I don't see if in depth analysis of the painting. Maybe that will be included in the style, but just want to make sure that it is accounted for. I also did a quick search and couldn't find if the painting is in museum or in its original location, so that would also be helpful to add.

Source wise, I think there is a really good mix of sources. Most of the bibliography are journal articles so it shows that they are using sophisticated sources.