User:Ford AJ/Caledonians/AnjelicaRae Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ford AJ


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ford AJ/Caledonians


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Caledonians

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello!

I like that you've utilized more sources and added multiple perspectives with the information you've added; I think it helps ensure the article is balanced and not only from one or a few sources. Your writing is concise, clear and I think it blends in well with the existing article. Your additions to the History and Archaeology section have definitely made the article feel more complete by filling in some gaps. At the top you mentioned that you are potentially adding a new section, I am just curious what you're planning to add as I don't see many current suggestions on the Talk page except for potentially adding 'Cherchen Men and Family'. I think focusing on improving the current sections is already a great objective, especially since Wikipedia displays a message at the top saying the article lacks inline citations. If you have a chance, consider reviewing the sources and statements beyond your additions and add inline citations. Overall, I think the additions you've made to the article are well done! Some of the sources you've found may also help me with my article, so thank you for that! I look forward to seeing your final edits.