User:Foresttoprairiekaren/Pond/Tiffanylujan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Foresttoprairiekaren


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Foresttoprairiekaren/Pond
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pond

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The article looks great! It contains a neutral tone, plenty of sources, and adds content to make the final page more complete.
 * It is well written and concise.
 * It is missing a link to another wiki article. It may be useful to link another article about the amphibian life cycle.