User:ForeverButNever/Inland Northern American English/Livelaughlove11234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ForeverButNever


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Inland Northern American English - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inland Northern American English - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.

i am pretty sure this does not follow the requirements for the assignment. We are supposed to be revising an article about a form of media or other audial/visual arts, and this is an article regarding language playing hand in hand with geography.