User:ForeverButNever/Nothing,Nowhere/Livelaughlove11234 Peer Review

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ForeverButNever


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 * Nothing,Nowhere - Wikipedia


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 * Nothing,Nowhere - Wikipedia

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The lead paragraph as well as his Early Life paragraph is needing to be expanded on. The personal Life section could be rephrased rather than so strict to the point and blunt about his drug habits and mental illnesses. It would also be interesting to know how he is doing now, and if there are any new hit songs and tour dates released. Many of the sources are twitter links, which can be not very reliable.

your edits in your sandbox look amazing though! I think they are very beneficial to the article and you word everything in a much better way.