User:ForeverExtraordinary/Obsessive–compulsive personality disorder/Jeppi2023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) User:ForeverExtraordinary


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ForeverExtraordinary/new sandbox - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The proposed changes are good I would like to see the where the empirical data came from or a visual representation of it just for ease of clarity. Content is good and definitely adds to overall article strength without giving bias information. Possibly expanding why there is comorbidities within these two personality disorders as well as what can be done to differentiate between these two disorders. ￼The content is strong and the changes seem to be headed in the right direction.