User:Forre179/Misogynoir/Emdor04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Forre179


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Forre179/Misogynoir?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Misogynoir

Evaluate the drafted changes
I noticed a lot of information that would be added to the article. There are small types and corrections that need to be fixed. Examples like there is no space or hyphen in "hip hop" nor is there a space between "deviant.Representations." The larger texts can be more simplified, or at least create smaller paragraphs. The few links I have clicked work and texts are cited. Adding more topics to Misogynoir will spread awareness.