User:Fossil Fuels/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
FedEx

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I am interested to see how a company that focuses on shipping and delivering items is impacted by climate change and also how they are contributing to climate change as well. It is obvious that a company that ships goods relies heavily on transportation such as planes and other vehicles. These all create emissions that impact climate change. I am interested to see how this company addresses these issues and what steps they have moving forward.

Evaluate the article
Content:

The article includes all relevant information regarding FedEx and it incorporates all aspects of the company. The article is not distracting or filled with unnecessary information. The finance section of the article needs to be updated as it only covers up until 2020. The article could also possibly have data providing the number of deliveries they have made in each form of delivery method.

Tone:

The article is very neutral and does not provide opinion or bias. The section regarding environmental practices and incentives is very limited and brief. There could be more depth in this section.

Sources:

The citation links in the article work and the sources support the points made in the Wikipedia article. The sources come from government websites, credible articles, and news articles. There are a lot of different sources that work together to support the content in the Wikipedia article itself. The article also includes images that help readers understand the content of the article.

Talk Page:

Most of the conversations on the talk page are asking to clarify what a specific acronym is related to FedEx. Other conversations bring up allegations towards FedEx's company.

Overall Impressions:

The article on FedEx is very informative and clear without having any bias or opinion. I think the article could include more information on their impact on climate change and what they are doing towards the issue. Also, the article should update the Finance section to include current information. Overall, the article is successful in informing readers about aspects of the company.