User:Foureyeslinguistics/Eva Hajičová/AmoderateDflatmajor Peer Review

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 * User:Foureyeslinguistics/Eva Hajičová
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The lead is concise and informative. The content of the body of the article is good, but it seems unfinished. The Honors and Awards section is empty even though there were awards mentioned in the Lead. There is a typo in the first paragraph of the Research section. Additionally, in the Biography section, the clause "with the Doctor of Sciences being one of the highest degrees a person can earn" is redundant; this could be altered without too much effort by linking to the Doctor of Science Wikipedia article. Overall I think this is a great improvement on the original stub and other than filling out the information that I can see you already have a plan for, it looks good.