User:Foureyeslinguistics/Eva Hajičová/RedCellar Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I really like the phonetic description of the name included. Seeing it, I want to include that in my own article!


 * I think that the publications page may be unnecessary when there is a reference page included? The biography pages I see on wikipedia don’t include any citations page different than the one that is included to them.


 * Just some grammar and spelling stuff: “In the the book The Meaning of the Sentence in Its Semantic and Pragmatic Aspects she and her two co-authors, Petr Sgall and Jarmila Panevová”, theres a double “the” at the beginning, and I think there should be a comma after aspects.


 * I think that the content (Lead, Biography, and Research) Is written very well, clear, and concise. If there's a heading called Honors and Awards, with the subheading only being Research, perhaps either the heading Honors and Awards could be taken out entirely (so that it is only Biography and Research) or another subsection could fall under Honors and Awards so that it has more than one subheading underneath?