User:Foxstronautilus/Climate risk insurance/Etaolive2256 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Foxstronautilus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Foxstronautilus/Climate_risk_insurance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate risk insurance

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information you added to the lead of this article is good, highlighting the difficulties faced by low income countries in regards to climate risk insurance, as well as the potential unreliability of it. I checked out the source and that's a really good secondary source, I think, however you might want to get one or two more sources, I think professor Rittelmeyer wanted around 4 sources for our edits.

Also, one thing I noticed, your sentence "These programmes are also usually timely and financially inadequate, which could be an uncertainty to national budgets" is a little difficult for me to understand. What do you mean by "timely and financially inadequate"?

I think you're off to a good start, but maybe try adding a little bit more and search some more sources.