User:Foxstronautilus/Climate risk insurance/Miemng Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Foxstronautilus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Foxstronautilus/Climate_risk_insurance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate risk insurance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

(Based on the current stub format of the article and the sandbox I am going to assume that all the writing was added by Foxstronautilus and there wasn't information previously.) I think the introduction of the climate risk insurance is informative, concise and relevant to the topic at hand. Additionally the writer uses a good amount of reliable sources in the current wikipedia page to substantiate their work. Nevertheless I think if the writer is planning to add body paragraphs to the wikipedia page they should be more specific on the financial risk-transfer mechanisms and the economic factors that are involved with climate risk insurance. I also think it would be helpful for readers if more information was included about how the benefits, limitations, and criticisms that have emerged from this specific insurance scheme.