User:Foxstronautilus/Climate risk insurance/Xena818 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Foxstronautilus


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Foxstronautilus/Climate_risk_insurance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate risk insurance

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you did a pretty good job at remaining neutral and getting to the point. You also did a good job to explain the critic/minority view on the issue. One thing though is a couple of the links implemented don't connect to a page. InsuResilience Global Partnershi p ; Climate Risk Adaptation and Insurance in the Caribbean (CRAIC) ; & Munich Climate Insurance Initiative don't connect to anything. I'm not sure how relevant that is/much is in your control, but other than that, it all looks good! Nice work!