User:Fpen333/Shengze Zhu/MusicManDan123 Peer Review

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Fpen333


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 * User:Fpen333/Shengze Zhu

Evaluate the drafted changes
-The lead is straight forward, and not overly detailed. It provides the reader with a brief introduction to the subject, leaving the subheadings for detailing.

-The tone of the article is balanced, and appears unbiased towards the subjects work.

-The article could benefit from a few visual representations of Zhu's work. Perhaps adding a couple movie covers could be beneficial.

-An infobox could be placed as well to have Zhu's most important details shown in a distinct part of the article.

-The article could use a couple more links. For example, when discussing how Zhu won the "Tiger Award" for best film, "Tiger Award" should be linked to information on the awards requirements, or an explanation on the significance behind the reward.

-Adding more links, especially links to other wikipedia pages will allow for this article to be more discoverable. As of now, there is only one linked article which will leave Shengze Zhu a little lost in the books.

-In the "Works" subheading, there are some words which could use some re-arranging, as they can come off as biased to some. For example, "Unique" or "Honorable". Additionally, the way this subheading is structured makes the reader feel as though she has only directed three films. It could be beneficial to your wiki article to include a full Filmography, so that we could know the entirety of her works.

-In regards to following Wikipedia's notability requirements, this article does a great job at having each bit of information cited with the respected source. I believe with the addition of an infobox, and the filmography, this article would follow the pattern of most director articles.

-The links all work, and are still current given their recent release dates. I think the sources used are reliable, however there are more sources to be found which could provide deeper information about the subjects life and work.

-The biography is a little vague, and doesn't tell us much about how Shengze Zhu got into film making.. It could be interesting to include some information on what started her journey as a director and producer. Here's an article which gives us some inside information!

https://www.screendaily.com/features/rotterdam-tiger-director-shengze-zhu-on-presentperfect/5136202.article

-Additionally, including the full names of her mother and father would make the article a bit more personal, as well as more complete.

-Overall the article is strong, especially given the little public information released about Shengze Zhu. I think your biggest strengths in this article is it's clarity, and straight to the pointness. There isn't any excess text which takes your attention away from the information that truly matters.

-Grammatically, your text is very strong as well. Proper punctuation is used consistently throughout each subheading.

Great Job!

-Dan