User:Frances Lucas/Forced abortion/AshleyWombacher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Frances Lucas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Frances%20Lucas/Forced_abortion?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forced abortion

Evaluate the drafted changes
I don't see any changes, maybe you could add some sources to the first paragraph and make the word choice simpler so it isn't so confusing