User:Franci8740/Inhwan Oh/Pomagranny Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Franci8740


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Franci8740/Inhwan_Oh?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to reflect the new content added by the peer.

The lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.

The lead does not include a brief description of the article's major sections.

The lead includes information that is not present in the article.

The lead is concise.

Regarding the content, the peer has added relevant and up-to-date information.

There is no content that does not belong, and the article addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics.

The content added is neutral, and there are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.

The sources are reliable, and the content accurately reflects what the cited sources say.

The organization of the content added is well-written, concise, clear, and easy to read, and it is well-organized, broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic.

Since the article has already been created, the notability requirements have already been met.

The overall impression is that the content added has improved the overall quality of the article, making it more informative and comprehensive.