User:Francisco Casillas 1/User:A.santana0999/Frank Stewart (artist)/Bibliography/Francisco Casillas 1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Frank Stewart)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:A.santana0999/Frank Stewart (artist)/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:A.santana0999/Frank Stewart (artist)/Bibliography

Evaluate the drafted changes
Doesn't read quite like a wiki page in all honesty, reads like a report someone did for a class assignment. could be structured in a different manner with sub menus etc. Sources are fine, placed at the bottom which is good, other than that however. This article does feel just like a paragraph of somebody's life instead of a educational article. The information is fine, however the organization could use much more improvement. Tone is fairly neutral however instead of speaking in past tense maybe just state the information more mechanically so the reader gets the information as soon as possible. Other than that, it's a relatively fine article.