User:FrankChen1999/Cycling in the United States/Dengtianhei Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(FrankChen1999)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FrankChen1999/Cycling_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cycling in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Frank, I'm peer-reviewing your article. I think you really did a great job improving the original article. You expanded the history and culture section and added another section to better address your topic. The tone is neutral and I can see that the claims in the content are properly cited.

Your content is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. However, for the demographics section, I think expanding a little bit and maybe adding another source would make it better. Because the article should aim for content balancing, so it would be good if all sections can be fully addressed. The sources you used are reliable and accurately address your topic. And you reflected on them perfectly in the content.

The content is concise, clear and easy to read, and the use of image is adherent to wikipedia regulations. There are some minor grammar errors and I have tried to correct them. Overall, good job Frank!

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