User:Frankie2359/Evolution of Sex-Determining Mechanisms/Dclark636 Peer Review

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Good article. I did have to go back to the lead to familiarize myself with the abbreviated terms several times but I don't think there is anything that can be done to prevent that. Some of the sentences seem to stand by themselves, specifically "The evolution of temperature-dependent sex determination is considered to be adaptive in most hypotheses, with a few suggest neutral or quasi-neutral evolution" at the end of the first heading, but a few more times in the article the flow seemed to be interrupted with independent technical sentences. The sources are all relevant to the material, and most are current but there are a couple that are a little dated (2004). Grammatically and structurally it is very well put together. The lead is helpful in understanding the rest of the article but should include a brief introduction to the other headings.

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