User:FrankieFacente/Wiffle ball/Lshersh Peer Review

General info
FrankieFacent
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wiffle ball
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FrankieFacente/Wiffle_ball?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)