User:Frankiefoyjames/Grass (novel)/Thekeith10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Frankiefoyjames


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Frankiefoyjames/Grass_%28novel%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Grass (novel)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hey! I am very impressed with your work so far, you put mine to shame! You give a very concise summary of your novel, as well as the background to more further understand what is going on. I do think you could expand on the novel's summary, as well as possibly adding some "critical reception" or "writing" sections to further expand on the article as a whole. I will say, though, I thought this was a work you were editing and not creating from scratch, so keep up the good work!