User:Freckledbaby/Spirit possession/Amymacd123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Freckledbaby - Spirit Possession


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Freckledbaby/Spirit_possession?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spirit Possession

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

What have they done well?

- 2 strong points that are relevant to the topic

- good citation for definition of spirit possession

- good header for "What is spirit possession?"

What could they do better?

- provide headers for the rest (yin-yang and Chinese spirit possession)

- include more citations

- needs more content and information

- reference section

Overall: good work but missing important citations and headers. The information provided is relevant to the topic and interesting.