User:Freckledbaby/Spirit possession/Hp85 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

The spirit possession group: Freckledbaby, Gremlins874, Joseph Carolina, Mli4804, Friedrice03, Zrep67JJ, Mattlloo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Freckledbaby/Spirit_possession?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spirit possession

Evaluate the drafted changes
What have they done well:

They added two sections that were relevant to the subject, and they put a quotation for the first topic, "What is spirit possession?".

What could they do better:

Creating a reference section and putting quotation for the paragraph "Chinese spirit possession". Explaining the "Ying & Yang" concept. They can add some pictures. There was not a lot of content yet, potentially looking forward to adding more. Suggestion: talking about the spirit possession automatism.