User:Freckledbaby/Spirit possession/MXP.J Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mattlloo, Zrep67JJ, Friedrice03, Mli4804, Joseph Carolina, Gremlins874, Freckledbaby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Freckledbaby/Spirit possession


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Spirit possession

Evaluate the drafted changes
What have they done well?


 * The two sections added are very relevant to the topic. The article is neutral, and the information is well written.
 * They added a good header for  What is spirit possession?.
 * The addition of the citation for What is spirit possession? is well put.

What could they do better?


 * Provide a citation for “Chinese Spirit Possession paragraph.”
 * Provide a reference section.
 * Adding pictures would make the article more appealing.
 * Divide sub-topics into new headers.
 * Suggestion: A topic about the spirit movement and its link to automatism can be a good addition to the article.

Overall: There wasn't much to evaluate, but the information added provides something to the article. However, the article still needs organization. Indeed, adding citations and headers would improve it.