User:Freddy Munoz/Abdominal exercise/Hiddenhippo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Freddy Munoz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Abdominal exercise


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abdominal exercise

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am not sure if you wrote the whole article or if you are adding onto the previously existing article. I am still trying to figure out how this wiki unit works. To provide some general feedback, I wish to say the following after reading through.


 * 1) I really like the organization of the article. You did a really good job explaining each sections
 * 2) the article is presented in a neutral way, even though there are controversial topics about the effects but you showed both sides.
 * 3) I think a couple more visuals of abdominal exercise that shows the 4 muscles will be helpful.