User:Freebeast24/Post-traumatic growth/MTFFTM Peer Review

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 * I would expand on the characteristics of PTG and add a source to back them up since there is no source at that part. Maybe give each characteristic a few bullet points on what they are and how exactly PTG effects them In stress related factors, the first sentence is unsourced. I’m not sure if it all comes from the same place but maybe add the source just to be safe For positive coping strategies I think a short sentence after the spirituality I would say “because…”  For person related factors is there anything someone who is lacking these traits can do to cultivate and develop them so they don’t feel hopeless?  Under mediators, social support is unsourced  I think history should be the first section after the intro because history is important to see how we got to where we are now.  What can be done to increase data on children and PTG to give future direction/recommendation for growing the available evidence?

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