User:Freespacegurl/Adrienne Kennedy/That's-on-history Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Freespacegurl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adrienne Kennedy
 * Adrienne Kennedy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current version of the article looks good. There are some grammatical errors in the introduction section. Additionally, some of the phrasing feels too opinionated. Aside from these things, the article is well-written, formatted properly, and has the necessary citations.