User:Frenchfrygirl2/Ballerina skirt/Bibliography

Ballerina Skirt article Sources:


 * https://www.childrensmuseum.org/blog/why-do-ballerinas-wear-tutus
 * provides information on the different types of skirts and why they were made
 * https://www.thenationalnews.com/lifestyle/fashion/the-complete-history-of-the-tutu-1.768301
 * made famous by Sareena Williams and her history behind it
 * https://www.thenationalnews.com/lifestyle/fashion/the-complete-history-of-the-tutu-1.768301
 * tutu formal definition
 * https://pointemagazine.com/tutus/
 * more information on the history
 * https://www.wise-geek.com/what-is-a-ballerina-skirt.htm
 * what is a ballerina skirt

Throughout reading the article titled “Ballerina Skirt” it can obviously be noted that the article lacks information and research. To me the article feels like it was thrown together and just rushed. The article only has a section on the history of the skirt and only uses five sources. I am planning to add pieces of information that provide more detail about the different types of skirts, how Sareena Williams has played a major role in the popularity of the skirt, provide more information on what a tutu and or ballerina skirt are, and finally provide more in-depth information regarding the history of the garment. The overall revisions that need to be made are more easily understandable language and making sure to have accurate information and sources. The article has great potential for more work to be added to it. Overall, the author just needs more information and a clearer and more concise way of presenting it.