User:Friendlyjellyfish7/Lucille Farrier Stickel/Friendlyjellyfish7 Peer Review

I think the lead works well here. It is concise and introduces Lucille Stickel well. I think maybe a suggestion I would make is allowing the lead to flow. Currently it seems like facts are just being listed off. Maybe, connecting the facts with how she established them would help.

I am not seeing any edits here, so I will offer suggestions. Firstly, I think it would be good to establish a background of Lucille Farrier Stickel. Even simple facts like her age and how her education was when growing up could be helpful. Next, it would be useful to go into her major contributions and impacts as they relate to class. I would probably spend the most time on this section and make sure the references are according to what wikipedia likes. Lastly, it may be good to add a conclusion section. This section could include her impacts on others or where her work took the realm of comparative developmental biology.

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Emaddox2, Kobe2022, and Sidenyjb


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