User:Frogskat/Helen Rodríguez Trías/Dann.devito Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Frogskat


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Frogskat/Helen_Rodr%C3%ADguez_Tr%C3%ADas?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Helen Rodríguez Trías

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I like the addition of an education section. It gave more insight into how she ended up where she did. If you could include what she studied, that would be awesome, but if you can't find that information, that's okay too :)
 * The medical career section was very interesting. Did she have any other careers in the medical field?
 * You did a nice job editing this post and cleaning it up to be concise and informational. Good job!! I think just a touch more elaboration on some points would be helpful, but overall, very well done.