User:FrozenFrosch/Afghan refugees/Vedisobe Peer Review

General info
FrozenFrosch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:FrozenFrosch/Afghan refugees
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Afghan refugees:Oddly, when I initially tried to navigate to this page, wikipedia sent me to "Afghan diaspora", and from there, this tiny redirection page that isn't actually connected to the Afghan refugees article? https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Afghan_Refugees&redirect=no I don't know if that's a programming loop that can be fixed - but wanted to note that it exists in case FrozenFrosch wants to look into it.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Thus far, FrozenFrosch has a detailed step-by-step plan on what they intend to edit in the article, as well as how. The edited draft for their article is yet small, but shows a strong direction and utilizes good resources.

At this time, I believe FrozenFrosch will make an excellent contribution to the article!