User:FryWrites/Jane Eyre/Roghikt Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

FryWrites


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:FryWrites/Jane_Eyre?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jane Eyre
 * Jane Eyre

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The introduction to your section is clear and concise. The content being added by your group is relevant to the text and provides further insight into the novel. Your introduction gives the reader a clear idea about the duration of the material your providing.The information being provided by your addition can not be found in another section of the article. You did a good job keeping your paragraph short while also delivering new information.

Content:

The content added by your group is relevant to Jane Eyre and provides a different perspective on the novel. I think adding a section on colonialism provided the readers with a perspective that was not discussed previously in the article.

Tone and Balence:

I think your work has a good flow and it's easy for the reader to understand the material. The content added has a natural tone and does not insert personal options.

Sources and References:

It looks like all your sources are reliable and you clearly provided were you found your information. I think you did a good job summarizing the material covered in your sources. Additionally, I was able to access your sources and it seems your links work!

Organization:

I think your paragraph is well organized, easy to follow, and clear in the message being delivered. As the reader, I found it easy to understand. I think you did a good job not packing it with an overwhelming amount of information.

Images and media:

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Overall impressions:

Overall, You guys did a great job with this! I liked the topic you chose and thought you were successful at expanding the Jane Eyre article. I did not see any grammar or spelling errors so good just editing. I think this adds a lot to the Jane Eyre Wikipedia article and expands it.