User:Fujia0801/China–United States trade war/Littlee0804 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Fujia0801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fujia0801/China%E2%80%93United_States_trade_war?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China–United States trade war

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

Overall, I think you've done a great job! First of all, you have a very organized structure that distinguishes the environmental impact of the US-China trade war into three main categories, the impact on China, on the US and on other countries. And, more than one country is mentioned in the classification of other countries. Also, you provide very accurate data on carbon emissions due to the U.S.-China trade war. In both countries, carbon emissions overall are actually down, which is pretty incredible. Finally, even though the history of the US-China trade war is not very long and the amount of relevant academic literature should not be very large, you still found four articles that can support the topic. However, I think your article would be even better if you make some improvements in the next points. First, the literature you found mainly considers the impact of this trade war on carbon emissions. Looking at carbon emissions alone might lead one to conclude that the US-China trade war has improved environmental problems. But environmental impacts also include many other aspects, such as water pollution, soil pollution, land weathering or deforestation, and I think we can try to find more literature to support this view. Second, I think you need to continue to enrich your content. There needs to be more discussion on the impact on Vietnam or other countries.